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My knee collides with his stomach and he gives out an 'umph' sound. I push him away again with my foot and inhale a good amount of fresh air. Getting off the table, I glare at the young man that tried to kill me.
"Who are you?!" I screech at him and he just chuckles to himself.
"I'm Dark, Amber. How can you even ask a question like that?"
"Dark wouldn't have done that. Now tell me . . . Who ARE You!"
"I'm Dark, well a least the better version of Dark. You can call me, Drac." And with a grin, he swings his left fist towards my face but I easy dodge it. I swiftly make my way towards the sink and pick up my frying pan. Before he could even touch me, I swing my weapon and collide the metal against his face. The hit made his body fall lifelessly on the floor with blood gushing out of his nose. I examine the body carefully. He really did look like Dark. The Dark I know and love. So what is he? Should I help him or call the police-
"Flareon!" I drop the frying pan and rush towards my unconscious Pokemon. He laid on the floor, passed out but still breathing. The treat! Dark- No, Drac (or whatever I should call him) must've had some kind of sleeping potion inside. That bastard!
"Amber?" Aqua! She came back! I pick up Flareons body and hold him in my arms while rushing forward to Aqua who gave me a confused look. "What's going on?" she asked.
"Aqua, we have to get out of here. That's not Dark, he tried to kill me. We need to call the police or my brother or- AAAAHHHHH!" a sharp pain cover my entire right leg and I look down to see a knife handle sticking out of my flesh.AS she took the blade out, I saw Aqua giving me an evil grin. "Not you too . . ."
"I was once Aqua, but now you can call me Aria my dear friend-." I lunged forward to knock her body to the ground and sprinted up my stairs, the pain still clothed my entire leg. I made my way to my room and locked the door, quickly took out Braviary and put Flareon back in his ball, grabbed my bow and quiver, and opened my window.
"Braviary Fly now!' I cry to my eagle Pokemon. With no hesitation, I feel the birds' talons grip on to my shoulders and lift me off my feet. In a few seconds, we fly out of my room and soar to the sky.
What is going on?! First, I almost get killed by this guy named Drac who looks like my friend Dark. Second, I get stabbed in the leg by my best friend and now I'm trying to escape certain death. What a great welcome home . . .
"REEAACK!!" I hear Braviary give out a cry of pain and look up to see things getting even worse. His left wing was frozen solid! Aqua- Aria must've used Ice Beam on us! Gravity began pulling us down and we made our way to the sea on Route 1. Great, my future was not looking bright anymore when we both hit the salt water.
*Amber's Note-(pant. . .pant) YOU GUYS BETTER LOVE ME FOR THIS! I SPENT TWO WEEKS TRYING TO MAKE PART 1 AND NOW IT'S FINALLY DONE. On with Part 2 . . . which will come in probably one or two more weeks.
For now, how do you like the story so far? Interesting . . . hate it . . . want me to continue . . . TELL ME!
"Who are you?!" I screech at him and he just chuckles to himself.
"I'm Dark, Amber. How can you even ask a question like that?"
"Dark wouldn't have done that. Now tell me . . . Who ARE You!"
"I'm Dark, well a least the better version of Dark. You can call me, Drac." And with a grin, he swings his left fist towards my face but I easy dodge it. I swiftly make my way towards the sink and pick up my frying pan. Before he could even touch me, I swing my weapon and collide the metal against his face. The hit made his body fall lifelessly on the floor with blood gushing out of his nose. I examine the body carefully. He really did look like Dark. The Dark I know and love. So what is he? Should I help him or call the police-
"Flareon!" I drop the frying pan and rush towards my unconscious Pokemon. He laid on the floor, passed out but still breathing. The treat! Dark- No, Drac (or whatever I should call him) must've had some kind of sleeping potion inside. That bastard!
"Amber?" Aqua! She came back! I pick up Flareons body and hold him in my arms while rushing forward to Aqua who gave me a confused look. "What's going on?" she asked.
"Aqua, we have to get out of here. That's not Dark, he tried to kill me. We need to call the police or my brother or- AAAAHHHHH!" a sharp pain cover my entire right leg and I look down to see a knife handle sticking out of my flesh.AS she took the blade out, I saw Aqua giving me an evil grin. "Not you too . . ."
"I was once Aqua, but now you can call me Aria my dear friend-." I lunged forward to knock her body to the ground and sprinted up my stairs, the pain still clothed my entire leg. I made my way to my room and locked the door, quickly took out Braviary and put Flareon back in his ball, grabbed my bow and quiver, and opened my window.
"Braviary Fly now!' I cry to my eagle Pokemon. With no hesitation, I feel the birds' talons grip on to my shoulders and lift me off my feet. In a few seconds, we fly out of my room and soar to the sky.
What is going on?! First, I almost get killed by this guy named Drac who looks like my friend Dark. Second, I get stabbed in the leg by my best friend and now I'm trying to escape certain death. What a great welcome home . . .
"REEAACK!!" I hear Braviary give out a cry of pain and look up to see things getting even worse. His left wing was frozen solid! Aqua- Aria must've used Ice Beam on us! Gravity began pulling us down and we made our way to the sea on Route 1. Great, my future was not looking bright anymore when we both hit the salt water.
*Amber's Note-(pant. . .pant) YOU GUYS BETTER LOVE ME FOR THIS! I SPENT TWO WEEKS TRYING TO MAKE PART 1 AND NOW IT'S FINALLY DONE. On with Part 2 . . . which will come in probably one or two more weeks.
For now, how do you like the story so far? Interesting . . . hate it . . . want me to continue . . . TELL ME!
My Holiday Disaster
Hi everyone! (Man, when was the last time I posted a journal entry) Merry Belated Christmas! Or Holiday if you don't celebrate Christmas. Anyway, how is everyone? How was your December? I hope it wasn't crazy like mines. Actually no, I hope it wasn't INSANE like mines. If you want to know why, please read on:
So I think I'll first start with that freaking elf on a shelf tradition we have in my house. If you're confused about what an elf on a shelf is, it's basically this elf that comes to your house and watches you to see if your a good or bad child. The only problem is, you can't touch it or it loses it's magic. I dislike that elf because I
Coming this Summer 2013
"Amber," the ten year old girl felt a soft nudge on her shoulders, making her body stir and her eyes open a millimeter wide. "Amber, time to get up,"
Her eyes finally opened and the sight of her father made her talk to him in a hushed voice. "What time is it?" she asked looking towards the window to still see the darkness.
"Early." said her father. "I'm going out and I want you to come with me."
"Won't we cause a scene walking around town at this hour?" she asked in a worried voice.
Her father shook his head. "Nah, as long as we're quiet, now come on. We're racing against the sun and he's winning so far. Oh, and dress warm Amber, it snowe
PROLOGUE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!DX
(Please read this prologue and give me some feedback or criticism pleeaaaaaase. I beg you all!!!!!T_T)
Prologue:
The bushes thrashed back and forth. A small figure ran through the forest trying to escape the dark silhouette following her trail of blood. The girl was panting heavily and her body ached with exhaustion but at the same time, she was determined to lose her predator as best as she could. She used her strong right hand to cover the wound on her left arm which continued to bleed out.
Hurdling over fallen trees and ducking under branches, she continued to get away from the blood-thirsty hunter. But something was wrong whe
First or Third Person P.O.V?
So I haven't been online in a while and there's a good explanation why. Remember that story I said I was working on a month ago? Yeah, that's why. I basically have the first couple chapters done but I had to rewrite the prologue because I didn't like the way it was written out. Now I have another problem to deal with and it's this-
Well, I should the first chapter to one of my friends and she was like:
"Why is it in third person point of view?"
Me: "What do you mean?"
"Well, I read newer books lately and mainly they're always in first person."
Me: "Is that a bad thing?"
"Well . . . mmm . . . I guess not but it seems to old-fashion."
Me
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OMG AMBER THIS HAS GOTTEN ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! I can't even predict what will happen next! I'm so curious its killing me!
You are like a....A person who can make people I don't know. I'll figure what that kind of person is. Though I'm in love with this story sooo much! *hugs you to death* I also missed you soooo much!
You are like a....A person who can make people I don't know. I'll figure what that kind of person is. Though I'm in love with this story sooo much! *hugs you to death* I also missed you soooo much!